Voiceover

In my exteneded sequence while Barry is walking to meet the loan shark I am going to use a voiceover. The voiceover will be of Barrys thoughts, this will help the audience understand what he is going through.

'Oh fucking hell, hes gunna kill me, I just know it! I don’t have his money and I know what hes capable of, hes a dangerous man! Alright, just calm down, don’t panic and try talk your way out of it, whats the worst that could happen? Well he could fucking kill me and the worst thing is barely anyone would even notice! Im a dead man walking. No im sure he’s a fairly reasonable man, im sure he will understand what im going through, just don’t panic and don’t piss him off. Everything will be fine and hes gunna have his money in a couple of days.'

First edit

I have completed the first edit of my short sequence and all the filming is done. However, after putting together my first edit it is clear that certain shots need to be re-shot in order to make my sequence the best it can be.
In some of the shots there is a lack of continuity and unfortunately in some of the shots the lighting is poor quality. Despite the few mistakes there are or the things that need to be re-shot I am pleased with how my first edit has turned out.